Last week I looked at the sign-up process for Quicken Loans and noted mostly favorable elements with a few areas of improvement I’m sure their team is aware of.
This week I want to quickly focus on the newsletter I recently received.
Some Great Things Going On
1. Content: I love it — it’s of course relevant and useful, but also well laid out and not too overbearing. If I’m signing up for a newsletter from a mortgage company during my research phase, I want juicy content that can aid in my education and decision making. Quicken Loans does this very well here.
2. Hyperlinks: Great use of hyperlinks within the text body which appear to be inspired by Eisenberg Brothers persuasion architecture best-practices.
3. Basics: They have navigation in the header and footer, pre-header call-outs (not in screen grab below), great text to image ratio, and several other basic best practices are being executed quite well.
4. Email Information: They have a cool Email Center at the bottom of the email that provides links to change preferences, FTAF, subscribe, and connect with them on their social media profiles. One item I would add here is a link to update my preferences.
Screen Grabs (Click Image to Enlarge)
Quick Areas of Improvement
1. Header: Below the main branding header there is quite a bit of white space around the phone number. White space is of course fine (and can be beneficial) but something appears off here. It could very well be how it renders for me (Outlook 2007)
2. Frequency: I may be on the wrong list, but for content like this (educating new home buyers — information about refinancing and the like) I’m wanting to see several each month while I’m in learning more to make a decision. This could be solved with some nice re-targeting campaigns based on my email engagement, or simply having more content for an additional newsletter.
3. CTA: As mentioned above, they have great use of hyperlinks within the email body to get subscribers on the site and engaged. What’s missing for me though in this newsletter is a focused area for connecting back to a sales rep. Yes, they have the phone number in the header, but a lot more can be done to get interested readers on the phone and closer to conversion. In my own testing, what has worked well is a dedicated area for contact info call-outs. (Often at the top right of the template). — This would of course require some template architecture adjustments, but well worth the test.
Below is a screen grab of what this might look like. Note: this is a quickly assembled wire-frame with no design and is meant only as a very general example. (click to enlarge)
There is more that can be discussed on this newsletter in areas such as dynamic content and segmentation, but I’ll wrap it up here. At some point I’d like to review the Rate Alert email from Quicken Loans. As with any company, there is always room for improvement – But overall some nice work coming out of the email department at QL. They have a good foundation with a lot of opportunity to take their email channel much further.
Cheers,
Forest
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